This is due on Tuesday, 29th November.
Charlotte
Simpson
122
Evergreen Terrace
Springfield
SP1
8YH
14th
December, 2014
The
Editor
Top
Gear Magazine
13
Sunrise Road
London
W4
8GH
Dear
Sir/Madam
I
am writing to express my disapproval about an article I read in your magazine
last week. The article was about the poor quality of the roads in Mexico.
As
someone with Mexican heritage myself, I have to say I found the article to be
extremely offensive, as it was very negative about Mexicans. Instead of
focussing on the roads, the main argument of the article seemed to be that
Mexicans are bad drivers because they are stupid, and, while this might be true
about some Mexicans, it is equally as true about some English drivers, and is
certainly not true of all Mexicans. To
suggest that it is, actually borders on racism, because you cannot make
judgments about an entire race of people based on the behaviour of a few.
I
think it would be a very good idea for your journalist to rewrite the article
in a more positive light, focussing more on the poor quality of the roads and
the fact that not a lot of money is spent on maintaining them which is, after
all, what the article was supposed to be about.
I
hope you will take my suggestion on board and, if you wish to contact me
regarding this issue, please use the address above.
Yours
faithfully,
Charlotte
Simpson
1.
Scan through the article and underline the following words:
Disapproval Quality
Heritage
Negative Focussing Rewrite
2.
Complete the sentence: ‘I am writing to express my _____________ about an
article I read in your ______________ last week.
3.
What was the article about?
4.
What group of people did the article apparently offend?
5.
The article seemed to focus on the idea of them being bad drivers rather than
what?
6.
Complete the sentence: ‘To ___________ that it is, actually borders on
_______________ because you cannot make _______________ judgments about an
entire race of people based on the ________________ of a few.’
7.
What does the writer of the letter suggest that journalist who wrote the
article do?
Now, if you want to really
challenge yourself, have a go at the following, slightly harder questions:
8.
Why are the first and last paragraphs quite a bit shorter than the others?
9.
Why would the writer of the letter be more offended by the fact that it is
negative about Mexicans than if it was negative about, say, Italians?
10.
Look at the second paragraph. The purpose of it is to explain why the writer is
complaining. What is the purpose of the third paragraph?
11.
In what ways do you think the letter is effective in getting its point across?
Think about the language the writer uses, the details she mentions and how the
letter is laid out.